Tuesday, August 23, 2011

On the farm

Mother sheep said "Eat some grass."By Samoa


  1. Hi Samoa,

    That was a interesting sentence that you did. Why didn't you explain more detail about it and this is what you could improve on. What you did well at is that you typed in some speech marks so the person that reads it they will know what the sheep is saying.

    From Noeramiah at Stonefields school

  2. Nice work Samoa,
    love the picture it reminds me of my friend who has a pet lamb. Any way did you need any help with your spelling.

    from savannah


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