The Year One Classes at Pt England School love to share their work with friends and family. We are 5 classes of 5 and 6 year olds and we have been doing lots of cool things at school. We are getting better at reading and writing and we know you will enjoy reading our stories.
Friday, August 26, 2011
Being shorn!!!
Look at my NZ icon getting shorn. My sheep doesn't like it because he might get cold!
The shearer is shearing the wool so we can make scarves, hats and carpet.
By Faioso, Room 4.
(Dictated to the Teacher)
Hi Faioso! I really like your story about the sheep getting shorn! Your drawing's really cool! I've seen lots of real sheep before and your drawing looks really realistic.
Hi Faioso, what a great story. You wrote a lot even though you area year one. I love you picture. It is a lovely picture almost like a photo. well done. :)
Hi Faioso, This is a really impressive picture! I watched a shearer do this to a sheep before I left New Zealand and your picture looks just like it! The story you've written to go along with it is fantastic! From, Serena D'Agostino (Ms. D.)
Hi Faioso!
ReplyDeleteI really like your story about the sheep getting shorn! Your drawing's really cool! I've seen lots of real sheep before and your drawing looks really realistic.
Keep up the awesome work!
Hi Faioso,
ReplyDeletewhat a great story. You wrote a lot even though you area year one. I love you picture. It is a lovely picture almost like a photo.
well done. :)
Hey Faioso AND ROOM 4
ReplyDeleteI Like your story about the sheep your witting was extricating keep it up ,Well done
Hi Faioso,
ReplyDeleteWhat a great story that is. It is very interesting! Your graphic is really realistic as well. I can tell you love drawing from your graphics.
Keep up the great work.
Yours Sincerely,
Mubasshira
Hi Faioso,
ReplyDeleteThis is a really impressive picture! I watched a shearer do this to a sheep before I left New Zealand and your picture looks just like it! The story you've written to go along with it is fantastic!
From,
Serena D'Agostino (Ms. D.)
HI Faioso I like your z.n icon and it looks magnificent.
ReplyDelete