Friday, September 10, 2010

Paddling to a new land!

"This is me pretending to be a mighty Maori mariner. I am paddling on a waka to Aotearoa.
When I get to Aotearoa I'm going to jump off the waka and kiss the sand on the golden beach!"
(Dictated to the Teacher)


  1. Well done Patricia i really like your story looking forward for another.

    Love big sis

  2. Patricia,

    I really enjoyed your story.

    What a wonderful picture you have made in kidpix.

    Keep up the good work.

  3. Wow, what a wonderful story, I really like the ending. I can't wait to read more of your stories.

    Miss Mac

  4. Patricia,
    My name is Stephanie I am in EDM 310 at the University of South Alabama. Your story was wonderful! I love all the colors you used. I also really like the cross you had on your boat. You seem to be very creative, keep up the good work! My blog is at come check it our I will be posting a blog about your picture!


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