The Year One Classes at Pt England School love to share their work with friends and family. We are 5 classes of 5 and 6 year olds and we have been doing lots of cool things at school. We are getting better at reading and writing and we know you will enjoy reading our stories.
Friday, September 10, 2010
Paddling to a new land!
"This is me pretending to be a mighty Maori mariner. I am paddling on a waka to Aotearoa. When I get to Aotearoa I'm going to jump off the waka and kiss the sand on the golden beach!" (Dictated to the Teacher)
Patricia, My name is Stephanie I am in EDM 310 at the University of South Alabama. Your story was wonderful! I love all the colors you used. I also really like the cross you had on your boat. You seem to be very creative, keep up the good work! My blog is at http://bellettystephanieedm310.blogspot.com come check it our I will be posting a blog about your picture!
Well done Patricia i really like your story looking forward for another.
ReplyDeleteLove big sis
Patricia,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed your story.
What a wonderful picture you have made in kidpix.
Keep up the good work.
Wow, what a wonderful story, I really like the ending. I can't wait to read more of your stories.
ReplyDeleteMiss Mac
Patricia,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Stephanie I am in EDM 310 at the University of South Alabama. Your story was wonderful! I love all the colors you used. I also really like the cross you had on your boat. You seem to be very creative, keep up the good work! My blog is at http://bellettystephanieedm310.blogspot.com come check it our I will be posting a blog about your picture!