The Year One Classes at Pt England School love to share their work with friends and family. We are 5 classes of 5 and 6 year olds and we have been doing lots of cool things at school. We are getting better at reading and writing and we know you will enjoy reading our stories.
Thursday, September 16, 2010
Treasure hunt...
The pirates on the ship are trying to find the treasure.(Dictated to the teacher) By Johnlee.
Hi there Johnlee, I really like your snippet of writing you have there!! Your picture is also really nice and detailed aswell!! I wonder if the pirates will ever find the treasure? We'll just have to wait and see. Keep up the good work Johnlee.
Hi there Johnlee,
ReplyDeleteI really like your snippet of writing you have there!! Your picture is also really nice and detailed aswell!! I wonder if the pirates will ever find the treasure? We'll just have to wait and see. Keep up the good work Johnlee.
From Sela
Hi Johnlee
ReplyDeleteThe picture is great.You must be good at drawing, I like how you used different colours.
From Jake GLS
We like your pirate ship from room 2 Reuben, Jesse
ReplyDeleteThat is a great picture of a ship. I am a horrible artist. i wish I could draw that well. I love all the colors.
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