The Year One Classes at Pt England School love to share their work with friends and family. We are 5 classes of 5 and 6 year olds and we have been doing lots of cool things at school. We are getting better at reading and writing and we know you will enjoy reading our stories.
Tuesday, September 14, 2010
Digger comes to school
The noisy digger is digging a big hole in the ground.(Dictated to the teacher) By Henry
Hi Henry, You've drawn a nice picture of the digger outside, I think it is very detailed!! I do agree with you that the digger is pretty loud!! But the digger is doing some good because they are helping us to build our new classrooms!! I hope that you keep on writing some descriptive snippets of writing Henry!!
Hi Henry, My name is Ryne Baxter and I am in EDM310 at the University of South Alabama in Mobile, Alabama. This is a very well drawn picture with a lot of wonderful detail. I can tell you have a great talent. Keep up the good work!!
Hi Henry, I am a student of EDM 310 at the University of South Alabama. From the looks of your drawling I can tell you spent a lot of time towards detailing, and it looks great! I think your drawling also shows a lot of creativity, which brings the picture to life. Keep up the fantastic work!
Hi Henry,
ReplyDeleteYou've drawn a nice picture of the digger outside, I think it is very detailed!! I do agree with you that the digger is pretty loud!! But the digger is doing some good because they are helping us to build our new classrooms!! I hope that you keep on writing some descriptive snippets of writing Henry!!
From Sela
Hi Henry,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Ryne Baxter and I am in EDM310 at the University of South Alabama in Mobile, Alabama. This is a very well drawn picture with a lot of wonderful detail. I can tell you have a great talent. Keep up the good work!!
Hi Henry,
ReplyDeleteI am a student of EDM 310 at the University of South Alabama. From the looks of your drawling I can tell you spent a lot of time towards detailing, and it looks great! I think your drawling also shows a lot of creativity, which brings the picture to life. Keep up the fantastic work!