Look at Dan Carter doing the haka! He is giving a challenge to the other team so the All Blacks win. He is wearing his All Blacks uniform with pride. If Dan gets a try his uniform is going to get dirty - but that's what rugby is all about!!! By Ajani.
(dictated to the teacher)
Wow you wrote a lot!
ReplyDeleteAnd that is a really good photo of Dan Carter wait a second that is a picture that you drew? because it is totally AWESOME! I love the background I love the picture I love everything about it. Keep up the good work.
Hi Ajani,
ReplyDeletewhy did you choose Dan Carter to do the haka only? When you wrote this it reminds me that this friday on the 7th of October stonefields school is going to be a all black supporter and the best one wins a prize. What team do you think will win the rugby world cup? Well, I think that the all blacks will win.
From Noeramiah at Stonefields School.
Good work Ajano,
ReplyDeleteI really liked how you said who was in the picture and what Daniel Cater was doing. I've got a question for you why did you only choose Dan Cater next time you could write who Dan Cater is competing with.
From Michelle at stonefeilds school.
hi Ajani what a magnificent said kerstein
ReplyDeleteSorry about that last post - my fingers are too fast!
ReplyDeleteWhat a magnificent picture. I hope Dan Carter scored a try. I hope he gets better soon.
From Kerstein
Hi Ajani
ReplyDeleteI really like your piece of writing and you did a really good picture of Dan Carter doing the Haka.
Keep up the Awesome work.
hi what a magnificent story. Do you known Dan cater is my best player. I just can't say there is nothing rough with that that is the best ever.
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