The Year One Classes at Pt England School love to share their work with friends and family. We are 5 classes of 5 and 6 year olds and we have been doing lots of cool things at school. We are getting better at reading and writing and we know you will enjoy reading our stories.
Wednesday, September 7, 2011
Keep your eye on the ball!
Look at my All Black rugby player. He is kicking the ball over the goalposts. He is a champion keeping his eyes on the ball. I hope he does a magnificent kick! By Ashlee. (Dictated to the teacher)
That's right you do need to keep your eye on the ball but you also need to look around you because you might bang into someone. I really liked how you wrote that you hope he does a magnificent kick. To make your writing even better is to say who the all black is in the picture.
Hi Ashlee, This is a wonderful picture you've drawn and great story you've written! I love the word 'magnificent' you used. What a grand vocabulary! From, Serena D'Agostino (Ms. D.)
hi ASHLEE I like your pitcher of you all some one ales kicking the ball very very far away from you on elanering in your class an i like how you i wish i could kick like that but i cant dawr a rugby ball going that far on the filed an how you an you dawrd a rugby ball by useing the cecely shapes an when i look at the rugby player i think its mmanonu kicking the all is it this you with long long hair an how you coled it in brown hair an you an how you had lith brown it looks very very cool love from toma
Look at my All Black rugby player. He is kicking the ball over the goalposts.
Hey Ashlee,
ReplyDeleteThat's right you do need to keep your eye on the ball but you also need to look around you because you might bang into someone. I really liked how you wrote that you hope he does a magnificent kick. To make your writing even better is to say who the all black is in the picture.
From Michelle at stonefields school
Hi Ashlee,
ReplyDeleteThis is a wonderful picture you've drawn and great story you've written! I love the word 'magnificent' you used. What a grand vocabulary!
From,
Serena D'Agostino (Ms. D.)
hi ASHLEE
ReplyDeleteI like your pitcher of you all some one ales kicking the ball very very far away from you on elanering in your class an i like how you i wish i could kick like that but i cant dawr a rugby ball going that far on the filed an how you an you dawrd a rugby ball by useing the cecely shapes an when i look at the rugby player i think its mmanonu kicking the all is it this you with long long hair an how you coled it in brown hair an you an how you had lith brown it looks very very cool love from toma