The Year One Classes at Pt England School love to share their work with friends and family. We are 5 classes of 5 and 6 year olds and we have been doing lots of cool things at school. We are getting better at reading and writing and we know you will enjoy reading our stories.
Monday, March 15, 2010
The Mane Attraction!
Mrs Barks has fluffy orange hair like a lions mane. By Cruz (Dictated to the teacher)
Wow Cruz,you really know how to draw!I love the picture of Mrs Barks.Her hair looks really funky and it does look like a lions mane......I really like your story.Plus you really hooked me in!
Great pictures cruz.Your picture looks a littlebit like her aspeicaly her hair.Your right her hair does look like a lions mane. I really liked it. Tino pai tamariki. From Tyla
Cruz!!! Hee hee hee hee hee! When I looked at your picture, I thought I was looking in a mirror!!! My hair is much fluffier in NZ than it was in Canada!
Cruz, This is a fantastic drawing. Mrs. Barks is my auntie! Her hair must have really puffed up since I last saw her here in Canada, but it is an excellent sketch. Good job!
haha Mr Barks.......you never know what comes up in childrens mind, maybe the next picture will be yours and what it will be descibed as....just wait and see. Keep up Cruz!
Mrs Barks has fluffy orange hair like a lions mane.
What a cool picture Cruz.
ReplyDeleteWell done. I really like it.
hahaha...thats funny. Cool pic cruz. well done!
ReplyDeleteHa ha ha that is true Cruz i like your picture.Infact my teacher is Mrs Barks.
ReplyDeleteFrom Kaycee
Wow Cruz,you really know how to draw!I love the picture of Mrs Barks.Her hair looks really funky and it does look like a lions mane......I really like your story.Plus you really hooked me in!
ReplyDeleteKeep up the good work Cruz!
By Jonita.Rm 12
Great pictures cruz.Your picture looks a littlebit like her aspeicaly her hair.Your right her hair does look like a lions mane.
ReplyDeleteI really liked it.
Tino pai tamariki.
From Tyla
Good work Cruz you got the hair prity good from Rauf room12
ReplyDeleteCruz!!! Hee hee hee hee hee! When I looked at your picture, I thought I was looking in a mirror!!! My hair is much fluffier in NZ than it was in Canada!
ReplyDeleteHi Cruz,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Laurien, and Mrs. Barks is my mum! I like the picture you drew of her and the way you described her hair!
Cruz,
ReplyDeleteThis is a fantastic drawing. Mrs. Barks is my auntie! Her hair must have really puffed up since I last saw her here in Canada, but it is an excellent sketch. Good job!
Wow Cruz! That's a brilliant picture and description! It looks exactly like Mrs. Barks! Great job!
ReplyDeleteHi Cruz,
ReplyDeleteWhen I saw your picture, I thought, "Hey, what's my mum doing in my computer?"...because it looks just like her. Great picture!
Hey Cruz, what a beautiful picture! I hope that I can have hair like hers some day...what do you think of that? Would it look good on me?
ReplyDeletehaha Mr Barks.......you never know what comes up in childrens mind, maybe the next picture will be yours and what it will be descibed as....just wait and see. Keep up Cruz!
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