The Year One Classes at Pt England School love to share their work with friends and family. We are 5 classes of 5 and 6 year olds and we have been doing lots of cool things at school. We are getting better at reading and writing and we know you will enjoy reading our stories.
Friday, March 26, 2010
The hungry giraffe.
The giraffe was eating crunchy carrots.By Henry.(Dictated to the teacher)
Hi Henry, Nice picture of a giraffe you have drawn. Its a very good picture to describe your piece of writing. I love to eat carrots, but to be honest I only like to eat them when their not cooked. I hope that you keep on writing because your writing is great!!!
Hi Henry,
ReplyDeleteWe like your picture of a giraffe. You are a very good artist.
From Oli and Charlotte.
Hi Henry, Nice picture of a giraffe you have drawn. Its a very good picture to describe your piece of writing. I love to eat carrots, but to be honest I only like to eat them when their not cooked. I hope that you keep on writing because your writing is great!!!
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Hi Henry, I love your giraffe.I am sure the giraffe liked the carrots. Great work and writing.
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Hi Henry, your giraffe looks really good! You are such a good artist, keep up the good work.
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