Thursday, July 14, 2011

Yummy


I like to eat fruit because it tastes yummy and it is healthy. I have oranges growing in my garden.
By Maypo

(Dictated to the teacher)

7 comments:

  1. Great work Maypo
    Do you know what is the healthiest part of a fruit is? I would like to hear your answer.


    From Zeb at stonefields school

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  2. MM I love fruit. did you know that it can make you grow strong? I love all the picture it looks like it was taken by a camera.
    Savannah

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  3. Hello Maypo

    This was a very nice piece of writing keep up the very great work and never give up and achieve your goal. :)

    By Cruz

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  4. Hey Team 1 rock stars

    You have cool fruity what is your favouite fruity in world I love your picture it looks cool and stand out with the colours.

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  5. Hi Maypo,

    Nice writing. It's nice to see you like eating fruits. I love fruits as well, they are healthy and have a lot of vitamins in them. I also liked your graphic, it was amazing and I could tell that those were the fruits that you like.

    Mubasshira Year 7

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  6. Hey Maypo that is an interesting sentence I like it keep up the good work.

    GOD BLESS YOU

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  7. Hello Maypo,
    Your right fruit is healthy. I like your picture. Keep up the good work!

    Shaniah

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