The Year One Classes at Pt England School love to share their work with friends and family. We are 5 classes of 5 and 6 year olds and we have been doing lots of cool things at school. We are getting better at reading and writing and we know you will enjoy reading our stories.
Monday, May 3, 2010
My volcano has erupted.
"Look at my volcano! Can you see the volcanic rocks exploding from the vent?" (Dictated to Teacher)
Nice work Mubashir
ReplyDeleteI like how you drew the volcano with the lava exploding.I can see the volcanic rocks is well.
Hi Mubashshir,
ReplyDeleteWhat a fanstastic picture! I like those rocks exploding from the volcano! I also like how you asked a question in your story...well done!
Hello MUBASHSHIR, what a good story. I like the words you used and the picture you have drawn. They match perfectly!
ReplyDeleteMrs Tele'a