Monday, May 3, 2010

My volcano has erupted.

"Look at my volcano! Can you see the volcanic rocks exploding from the vent?"
(Dictated to Teacher)


  1. Nice work Mubashir
    I like how you drew the volcano with the lava exploding.I can see the volcanic rocks is well.

  2. Hi Mubashshir,

    What a fanstastic picture! I like those rocks exploding from the volcano! I also like how you asked a question in your story...well done!

  3. Hello MUBASHSHIR, what a good story. I like the words you used and the picture you have drawn. They match perfectly!
    Mrs Tele'a


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