The Year One Classes at Pt England School love to share their work with friends and family. We are 5 classes of 5 and 6 year olds and we have been doing lots of cool things at school. We are getting better at reading and writing and we know you will enjoy reading our stories.
Tuesday, November 22, 2011
The firey solar system!
Can you see my magnificent picture of the Atlantis space mission? The astronauts are going to study planet earth.
Their rocket has a billowing smoke trail behind it.
There is a comet that is flying through space in the air - can you find it?
Mars is a little bit read and orange because it is a boiling hot planet that has no water, and lots of red dust!
By Noah, Room 4.
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Hi Noah,
ReplyDeleteWhat a interesting and well crafted story you have there. I also like how you said what Mars looked like and your picture looks FANTASTIC!
Keep up the AMAZING work Noah!
From Seini-Mino
Oh no! It looks like the comet is heading straight for the Atlantis! Fantastic story and picture - you magnificent young man.
ReplyDeleteLove Mum and Toby