Tuesday, November 22, 2011

The firey solar system!

Can you see my magnificent picture of the Atlantis space mission? The astronauts are going to study planet earth.
Their rocket has a billowing smoke trail behind it.

There is a comet that is flying through space in the air - can you find it?
Mars is a little bit read and orange because it is a boiling hot planet that has no water, and lots of red dust!

By Noah, Room 4.


  1. Hi Noah,
    What a interesting and well crafted story you have there. I also like how you said what Mars looked like and your picture looks FANTASTIC!
    Keep up the AMAZING work Noah!

    From Seini-Mino

  2. Oh no! It looks like the comet is heading straight for the Atlantis! Fantastic story and picture - you magnificent young man.

    Love Mum and Toby


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