Monday, November 7, 2011

The Atlantis Mission

This is outer space. Look at my rocket flying fast as lightening through the sky!
It is on a mission to study planet Earth. Can you see my comets and their tail trails?
I wish I was an astronaut!!
By Tom, Room 4.

(dictated to the teacher)


  1. Cool! I like your sentences Tom. I want to be an astronaut too! I also like the photo, Who drew it?

  2. Hi Kush, Tom here. I drew it myself!!
    Thanks for your post.

  3. Miss To'oto'oNovember 9, 2011 at 10:48 PM

    Wow! Tom I am so impressed with you're drawing and story. I wish I was an astronaut too. I wonder what it is like for an astronaut to live out in space?


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