Friday, May 27, 2011

Zoom Zoom Zoom!

Mum is zooming past the shops.She stopped at the traffic lights. Mum is on her way to the zoo.(Dictated to the teacher)By Bobby-Jon.


  1. Wow Bobby-Jon,

    That is a great story. Did you go to the zoo with your mum? If you went to the zoo I hope you enjoyed going there. Was it just you and your Mum that went to the zoo? What was your favorite animal at the zoo?

    From Noeramiah at Stonefields School.

  2. love it! I love how you used all those Adjectives and the way you described it and how you drew the Amazing picture lots of determination love it!

  3. I like you car bobby jon it looks cool. did you go to the zoo with yo mum.


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