The Year One Classes at Pt England School love to share their work with friends and family. We are 5 classes of 5 and 6 year olds and we have been doing lots of cool things at school. We are getting better at reading and writing and we know you will enjoy reading our stories.
Thursday, May 19, 2011
Fruit in my garden...
I have an apple tree in my garden.(Dictated to the teacher) By Ana
Hi Ana, I really like your picture you drew. It is nice and I think it really looks like a garden and I think you should draw another picture of your garden. I hope it will be a cherry tree because I love cherry's. It is my favorite. I also Like your tree that you drew from your garden so I think you should keep up the good work you are doing. If you Don't know how to draw a cherry tree it does not matter because everyone is not good at drawing every thing. I like the sun the most because I think you colored it in properly and it looks good to me. from Roquia at Stonefields school.
Hi Ana, That is so cool that you have an apple tree in your garden you're so lucky. Do you pick the apples with your family? The thing I like about your writing is that you wrote where the apple tree was and what type of tree it was.
Hi Ana, I really like your picture you drew. It is nice and I think it really looks like a garden and I think you should draw another picture of your garden. I hope it will be
ReplyDeletea cherry tree because I love cherry's. It is my favorite. I also Like your tree that you drew from your garden so I think you should keep up the good work you are doing. If you Don't know how to draw a cherry tree it does not matter because everyone is not good at drawing every thing. I like the sun the most because I think you colored it in properly and it looks good to me.
from Roquia at Stonefields school.
Hi ana good story said ajani.
ReplyDeleteHi Ana,
ReplyDeleteThat is so cool that you have an apple tree in your garden you're so lucky. Do you pick the apples with your family?
The thing I like about your writing is that you wrote where the apple tree was and what type of tree it was.