"This is my picture about Rangitoto erupting. We made a fake mini volcano at Mission Bay.
The lava is flowing down the sides of the volcano. Venetias Dad dug a big hole with his spade and we put vinegar and baking soda and red food colouring in the crater. It was exciting when it erupted!" By Jamal (dictated to Teacher)
Good work Jamal keep it up
ReplyDeleteHey Jamal!I loved your story because it had lots of detail and also I liked how you described how the lava was flowing down the volcanoe!I hope you had fun at Mission Bay.Anyways keep up the good work and I forgot to say that I also loved your picture of the fake volcanoe!!
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Hey Jamal,did you have fun watching the crater explode?Did you that on the day you went to Mission Bay team three went to One Tree Hill.I bet that our trip was as fun as yours.Keep up the good work Jamal.
ReplyDeleteFrom Tyla-Marie Rm12
Hey Jamale I liked your pitcher of the fake volcano.Keep it up
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