Thursday, June 17, 2010

My volcano

The volcano is erupting and the lava is flowing down.By Lanzie. ( Dictated to the teacher)


  1. Terrific work Lanzie. The lava looks hot.
    Ms F, Shelly Park School

  2. To Lanzi,
    I like your volcano because it has lots of lava flowing down the sides and it has a good background.
    From Nathan and Matalena.


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