The Year One Classes at Pt England School love to share their work with friends and family. We are 5 classes of 5 and 6 year olds and we have been doing lots of cool things at school. We are getting better at reading and writing and we know you will enjoy reading our stories.
Tuesday, October 13, 2009
Cinderella's Ball Gown
The Fairy God Mother turned the old torn dress into a beautiful ball gown.
Hi Brooklyn, Your picture of Cinderella's ball gown is colourful and detailed. We really like the colours you used like red, yellow, pink, blue and green. From Amy and Celia.
Hi Brooklyn,
ReplyDeleteI really like the bit of the story that you shared. I also like your picture of Cinderella in her gown.
From Anisah.
Hi Brooklyn,
ReplyDeleteYour picture of Cinderella's ball gown is colourful and detailed. We really like the colours you used like red, yellow, pink, blue and green.
From Amy and Celia.
Hi Brooklyn,
ReplyDeleteYou have drawn a really good picture of Cinderella's gown. Wow, it's got lots of colours! Well done!
From Robbie.