Tuesday, October 20, 2009

The butterly flies away from the school kids. They might hurt him.
By Kyan.


  1. Hi Kyan,

    I enjoyed reading your story. I like that you wrote a second sentence to explain why the butterfly was flying away from the kids.

  2. Hi Kyan,

    Beautiful butterfly. Do you see many flying around the school? We have a few at the back but they only come out when the weather is nice and warm.

    Well done Kyan


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