Friday, August 23, 2013

Snow White-Jasmine

"Once upon a time there was a beautiful girl named Snow White. She lived with the evil queen. She didn't like the queen because she is the evil witch. The evil witch gave her a poisen apple. She ate it then she died. One day a prince came to kiss her, then she came back to life and they lived happily ever after" said Jasmine. (Dictated to Gabriel.)

18 comments:

  1. Kia Ora Jasmine, Its your buddies from Room 4! Thankyou for having such a great post with amazing details in your picture.
    We LOVED the way you retold the story in your own words.

    Arohanui,
    Room 4 xxxxxxxxxx0000000000xxxxxxxx

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  2. JASMINE IS IN ROOM 4August 23, 2013 at 7:25 PM

    HI IT JASMINE THANK YOU FOR
    IIKEING MY PICTURE


    AROHANUI
    ROOM 4 XXXXXXXXXXXXXOOOOOOOOOOXXXXXXXXXX

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  3. HI ROOM 4 IT JASMINE YOU REALY
    IIKE MY PICTURE YES SAID ROOM 4
    AROHANUL
    ROOM 4 XXXXXXXXOOOXXXXXXXXXXX

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  4. Hello My daughter Jasmine,
    I love your Snow White story and beautiful picture to go with it. Keep up the great work, I am so proud of you!!

    Arohanui
    MUMMY LOUISE

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  5. Hi Jasmine, I love your picture and I love your story about Snow White and the Prince. I love how you are doing great work in Room 4.

    From Jedida
    Xxxxx

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  6. Hi Jasmine

    I enjoyed reading your story and your picture is stunning.
    Keep up the good work.

    Best wishes,
    Meryl Hamer

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  8. thank you jedida and meryl Hamer and
    jasmine and mum

    I so happy

    Now I have 7 comment

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  9. Jasmine, I am so impressed with your story telling. I hope to see and learn more about your stories. love your aunty Diane.

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  10. Hello Jasmine
    I really love your picture so please keep up your reading and writing.

    love
    Daddy

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  11. Dearest Jasmine,

    Your choice in colour of the background in your picture makes the two characters stand out very well. I was impressed with this choice of colour and also with you using many different colours to bring to life the two main characters in your story.

    What also impressed me was your ability to provide a concise, brief and clear summary of the story. When I write, it is a challenge for me to make it brief.

    I look forward to reading more stories and seeing more pictures from you.

    Love always,
    Aunty Michelle

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  12. Dearest Jasmine,

    Your choice in colour of the background in your picture makes the two characters stand out very well. I was impressed with this choice of colour and also with you using many different colours to bring to life the two main characters in your story.

    What also impressed me was your ability to provide a concise, brief and clear summary of the story. When I write, it is a challenge for me to make it brief.

    I look forward to reading more stories and seeing more pictures from you.

    Love always,
    Aunty Michelle

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  13. Hello jasmine Wow jasmine I love your
    picture
    love motekiai

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  14. Hey Jasmine my little Princess Amazing Work my little Princess love the picture so beautiful and the story Amazing Love it and i hope to read more of your story Princess Jasmine
    Love Mele Fangaloka

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  15. Hi jasmine
    WoW jasmine I Iike your picture keep the
    good work jasmine
    love from Sikini

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  16. Hi jasmine Wow jasmine
    you your gool Iike a pincess

    iove miTekiai

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  17. Hi Jasmin e your awsome
    I Iike picTure
    you Iike a pincess jasmine

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  18. hi jasmine WoW
    jasmine I love your picTure
    love froom Naomi

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