Thursday, May 10, 2012

Stripey Tiger


My stripey tiger is looking for some water to go for a swim. He looked very hot. 
I looked at the fluffy tiger, and saw his small round eyes. I looked at his whiskers and they were long and pointy. He has black stripes on his body and ears. He looked happy to me...
By Kelly, Room 4.
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  1. Room 4 rockstars!May 11, 2012 at 10:41 AM

    Hi Kelly,
    We love your picture because its beautiful and you used the right colours for a tiger.
    Your story had lots of details and that is the sign of a good writer!!
    Arohanui,
    Your friends in Room 4.

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  2. AnonymousMay 15, 2012 at 8:38 PM

    Mrs.Wild is a good teacher ......taran Nandha Room 4

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