The Year One Classes at Pt England School love to share their work with friends and family. We are 5 classes of 5 and 6 year olds and we have been doing lots of cool things at school. We are getting better at reading and writing and we know you will enjoy reading our stories.
Thursday, May 24, 2012
The happy elephant with the long twisting trunk has deep brown grey wrinkles. His big wrinkly ears go flap, flap, flap, flap to keep his body cool. By Naomi (story designed by Room 1)
Hi Naomi - its your Room 4 friends here. We love your elephant because your words are VERy descriptive. When we read your story out loud, it drew a picture in our heads of your elephant!!
Well done Naomi! You have remembered our recycled story using interesting word groups and illustrated the story appropriately. Next step would be to try out those words groups on your own to create a 'Naomi' inspired story.
Hi Honey - your picture looks really cool - i like how you have drawn your elephant :)
ReplyDeletekeep up the great work - Love you Mum :)
hi naomi I like your elephant.
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Hi Naomi - its your Room 4 friends here. We love your elephant because your words are VERy descriptive. When we read your story out loud, it drew a picture in our heads of your elephant!!
ReplyDeleteWell done and thanks for sharing,
Well done Naomi! You have remembered our recycled story using interesting word groups and illustrated the story appropriately. Next step would be to try out those words groups on your own to create a 'Naomi' inspired story.
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