The Year One Classes at Pt England School love to share their work with friends and family. We are 5 classes of 5 and 6 year olds and we have been doing lots of cool things at school. We are getting better at reading and writing and we know you will enjoy reading our stories.
Wednesday, August 18, 2010
Fishing
Kupe put some bait on his hook. He threw it into the ocean and caught a big fish.(Dictated to the teacher)By Lomio-Lee
To Lomio-Lee, That is a wonderful fish you have drawn. We love your story as well because it makes so much sense. It is a good retelling. From Jack and Charlotte.
To Lomio-lee (son) I like,how you draw your fish and the colour you put on your picture,and how you draw da hook and da ocean,and i love how you put all your draw to are stroy,very nice son,i like it so much,keep up da hard work :) :) :).......
To Lomio-Lee,
ReplyDeleteThat is a wonderful fish you have drawn. We love your story as well because it makes so much sense. It is a good retelling.
From Jack and Charlotte.
Hi Lomio-Lee
ReplyDeleteWe think that your fish looks amazing! Well done.
From
Mrs Lagitupu and Room 23
To Lomio-lee (son)
ReplyDeleteI like,how you draw your fish and the colour you put on your picture,and how you draw da hook and da ocean,and i love how you put all your draw to are stroy,very nice son,i like it so much,keep up da hard work :) :) :).......
Hey lomio-Lee
ReplyDeleteWe love your draw and how you put in 2 are story,very nice lomio-lee great work.