Monday, November 2, 2009

Last Wednesday, I went to the school production with my family. I liked the Transformers, Trolls, Teddy Bears, and Snowflakes. My dad's favourite was the Teddy Bears because they were funny. I liked that the Toy Shop was magical and I liked seeing Michael Jackson. Michael Jackon was cool!


  1. What a great piece of writing you have written Zane. I really enjoyed the production. It's hard to choose a favourite because I thought all the dances were amazing but I'd have to say the Snowflakes were very clever. Keep up the great writing.

    Miss Lavakula

  2. Fantastic writing Zane. We are glad that you had such a good time at the school production with your family. We can see that you have tried very hard in your story writing, keep it up!

  3. Hi Zane,
    I can tell from your writing that you loved Production as much as I did. I really couldn't chose a favourite because I thought it was all so fantastic.
    Do you think you would like to be on the stage in our next Production?

    Keep up the great writing Zane.

    Mrs Nua

  4. Hi Zane

    That was a great story about the production. I like the way you mentioned lots of the characters in the production. It was a great show.

  5. Hey Zane

    That was a good production Zane.I really liked the transformers,teddy bears and the trolls they were awesome they were cool enough!.


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