Wednesday, September 4, 2013

Sparkles crown

Sparkle woke up and put on her crown, her magic lipstick and her magic dress. Happy came and knocked on the door and when Sparkle opened the door Happy said, "you look beautiful Sparkle!" 

Composed and dictated to the teacher by Esther Rm 1.


  1. Kia ora Esther

    WE are Room 2 from Panmure Bridge School.We like your crown and all the sparkles. We were wandering what the magic dress looked like. Our favourite colours are pink,gold, silver and purple.

    From Room 2

  2. I love how you included speech in your story. I can just imagine how beautiful Sparkle would have looked!


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